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Great job! I like your use of color via a limited color palette. It really sets the tone I feel. I do have one critique of sorts and its the person. It just might be me (probably is) but when I look at it I feel as if its body is facing one way while the rest of them is facing the other way. I'm not 100% sure if they are supposed to be looking at the monster in the sky or away from it due to the angles of the arms, and his right(our left) leg and how its drawn looks, the part not in shadow looks like the back of someone. Anyway, other that that issue (maybe I'm an idiot), its overall great!

Can't wait to see more from you!

HappytoDraw responds:

Thanks for a great review/critisism. I see your point with the foreground figure and agree it's a little hard to read. I could have been more precise in painting the silhouette. Glad you like the picture

I've never seen the show but I like what you've done. Nice line work, nice choice of colors, the overall atmosphere is very dire as well.

Great job!

As far as a minor critique since nothing is perfect, typically(lol), are the little spikey-balls in front of Steven, they don't look is as if they're round. The one on our left(his right) has one spike that should look like its facing toward the viewer more(the longer one above the shading of the ball angled toward Steven). Maybe its just me. Yes I know its something small and stuff.

Can't wait to see more from you!

(should i watch the show?)

ZeTrystan responds:

Well thanks you! I'm trying to draw more complex things, and I'm slowly getting used to it!

Haha, no problem about the critique, I completely agree. I didn't put a lot of efforts on those spiked balls (funny name, ohoh).

And YES, you should watch the show! It's amazing, emotional, and hurts the feels. Never saw that in a cartoon this kind.

Miyazaki should definitely see this.

Took me a bit but i finally got it!

I'm glad to say my younger self would be partially proud of me. I never wavered with what I want to do in life(entertain people via various means) but would be disappointed that I didn't work harder, which is something I'm remedying! My younger self might be proud that I finally got back into art as well, which is essentially what made me realize I want to entertain people.

Great job of course, even though I don't get many of the references since I don't know about the toys much. All I get are the super obvious ones, such as who the characters are. Also, no NG Tank? :P

deathink responds:

Haha, I usually only put the tank in illustrations.

As a huge fan of Rocky Horror, I love this! Even if i wasn't a fan, this is still awesome on its own!

I fucking love Bojack Horseman. Finally got around to watching Season 2 last night! Fancy seeing this here! I think I my try to get some prints of this soon!

Cyberworm360 responds:

Haha its a really great show. And id appreciate that very much!

Best funnie comic evar.

Seriously though, I fucking enjoyed this

Jon @FGIJonC

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