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Looks pretty good. I say keep practicing at it, you can only get better!

Also,
its a little
annoying
when you have unnecessary line
breaks :P

Keep it up!

For me I like elements from both versions. I like the more flat black of the outfit on the left side, though I think it could a little shading, but I like the shirt on the right version better. I like the hair on the right better than the left but I like the mouth on the left better than the one on the right?

Maybe somehow do a combination of both if possible?

karismaticprik responds:

Thanks. The mouth on the right doesn't have any lighting applied to it so it appears black. Combining them would take some work, but I'll keep that in mind for the future.

Hey, maybe try to recreate this digitally at one point, using color and shading and whatnot. Might be nice to see.

Keep practicing!

The drawing isn't great, but don't let that discourage you! Keep practicing drawing digitally and traditionally. You can get better, I'm proof of this (long story behind that), it just takes practice and determination. If you want to keep doing digital art, try to invest in a drawing tablet at some point, it'll make things a bit easier. Also, look into getting software made for drawing, such as Adobe software or Manga Studios, etc. If you don't have the money, I think PaintTool SAI is free and its a pretty good program.

Keep it up and maybe one day recreate what you were going for with this piece!

rajand100 responds:

Thank you so much because I have only been doing art for 1 year. Damn I've been drawing stickmen my entire life. Also when I first posted this I thought there would be a long line of hate comments so that is why I reminded people that it was my first experience for electronically drawing!!

-RajanD100

I'd like to see this colored, unless the black and white is what you were going for, in that case I think you should add a bit of shading to it to make it more...impactful for lack of a better word.

Also, his left hand looks a bit messed up, like its twisted 180 degrees(where his thumb isn't in front) unless you were just going for non-traditional hands, then I take what I said back. I also think that a character like this would maybe do better in an animation perhaps since there isn't much going on in this image.

Keep it up, yo!

That's pretty much how I consume my soda.

That description sounds about right.

ThePsychoSheep responds:

I really didn't try thinking of something witty

ATTITUDE CITY BABY

TopSpinThefuzzy responds:

THIS SHIT GETS CRAZYYYY

Congrats dude! Also, nice work as always. I feel like I've seen some of those names from somewhere.......... >_>

deathink responds:

Meh... I just pulled random names out of a hat, and I am sure they are of no intentional importance.

OH GOD WHERE'S HIS LEGS?!

Nice work!

Jon @FGIJonC

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